Thursday, 23 April 2015

Feedback results



These are the results of our Audience feedback. We asked 10 people to watch our short film and to fill in our questionnaire. All people surveyed said that our short film was suitable for our target audience of teenagers and young adults. Everyone surveyed also said that the music fit the films genre of mystery/thriller. The majority of people said that the use of cinematography and editing helped build tension. However, comments on how the film could be improved included "build more tension". If we where going to act on this feedback and wanted to create more tension we could add more narrative and build on the story more and film with low key lighting. We could also add darker filters to the footage that we already have.


Audience Feedback

How did you use conventions of real media texts in your production?

The Shadow Short Film

Monday, 23 March 2015

Script


This is the script for the ending of our film. Perviously when filming, we didn't use a script and just improvised. However, we didn't believe this was very effective as it took longer to film and when we came to edit, the story line wasn't very clear.




-------------------Finds article, rings Shannon----------------

Charlotte: I’ve found something, you need to come. I think it’s her.




---- Shannon knocks on door----

Shannon: What is it what have you found?

Charlotte: Look, Isn’t this the girl who is stalking you?

Shannon: Yeah…….
She’s dead?

Charlotte: It say’s she’s called Poppy Noble

Shannon: So we’re related?

Charlotte: We must be and look, it’s your bracelet. Maybe that’s why she’s following you. She wants it back!

Shannon:, you can’t honestly believe that.

Charlotte: Well why else would she be stalking you?
We need to give her it back.
The article says she’s buried in Skelton cemetery.






At cemetery

 Shannon: How’s this going to work?  How can I give it back?

Charlotte: Just leave it by her grave.
----------------------------------Places on grave-----------------------------





---------------Stalker putting on bracelet and vanishing------------------

Monday, 5 January 2015

Feedback

This is one of the feedback sheets we received after our pitch